Week 8 Comments & Feedback

The feedback from people in this class has helped me a lot when I'm unsure of something. The criteria we write about may be hard to interpret and I think several people have helped me with my writing skills and what sounds better. I think it's my favorite part of the class that we give each feedback because I want to know what people think about my work and how I can improve it. I also enjoy giving feedback because I know I enjoy hearing other people's ideas. I think its something I still have room for improvement on.

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